Question

Walking the cold road,
Looking for him.
Walking on water,
Will I sink or swim?

The waves come crashing,
The light fades out.
I can’t give up,
Even if I want to drown.

Too many lies,
I’ve tried so many times.
But he isn’t coming,
No he isn’t coming.

Where are you?
Am I in the void?
I must have given up,
I probably didn’t have a choice.

I don’t know you,
But I know I need you.
Can happiness be true?
Or is it a myth?

Answer 1

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Answer 2

@aryandecoolest @yololifelove @itsbribro @nikin @oliviacaroline2123 @PaulaLovesSchool13

Answer 3

omg omg omg


this <3

Answer 4

Is this supposed to be a question you are asking, or do you want opinions on how good it is, because it's a really good poem :)

Answer 5

when i saw the first line I :O

Answer 6

@PaulaLovesSchool13 ikr!!!

Answer 7

YEAH ;)

Answer 8

Thanks guys <3

Answer 9

You're welcome, keep writing! I love writing myself.

Answer 10

sure

Answer 11

OmG i love this SO MUCH!!!

Answer 12

This is beautiful, you should be proud!

Answer 13

this is how i feel!! very very nice

Answer 14

O_O Oh God

Answer 15

Thanks guys <3

Answer 16

your welcome <3

Answer 17

Good job! its really beautiful

Answer 18

this was just... Beautiful!

Answer 19

Here @GabbyCakes I made this for you because I thought your poem would look nice with a picture behind it.