can someone help me reword this thesis statement for my concluding paragraph ?

Christmas is a tradition that me and my family celebrate because it is important to my religion, I get to spend time with my family, and exchange gifts.

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can someone help me reword this thesis statement for my concluding paragraph ?

Christmas is a tradition that me and my family celebrate because it is important to my religion, I get to spend time with my family, and exchange gifts.

anonymous · Answer

@jgirl128 : can you help me please?

anonymous · Answer

@aryandecoolest : can you help please?

anonymous · Answer

My family and I celebrate christmas its a tradition because it is really important in our religion. On christmas i get to spend time with my family and recieve gifts. Hope that helps lol

anonymous · Answer

Christmas is a tradition where me and my family celebrate as it is important festival for me in my religion.I get to spend lot of time with my family where i enjoy having exchange of gifts with them.
this should work ... :P

jgirl128 · Answer

a thesis is usually one or two sentences. 

My family and I celebrate Christmas because it's important to my religion. On Christmas, I get to spend time with my family and exchange gifts.