Question

Can someone please read my essay and tell me any grammar errors they see or words I can change to make better. Thanks

Answer 1

I can try?

Answer 2

I will atttach it

Answer 3

checking now (=

Answer 4

Try this site I use it to correct my younger sisters essays:

http://www.polishmywriting.com/

Answer 5

It doesn't improve my words my teacher gives me bad grades because my words are not of a college student.

Answer 6

Collage? Im a Junior... WOW! I hope I do not end up getting that type of teacher )=

Answer 7

Yeah they are really tough on grammar and word choice they mark points off for every error.

Answer 8

uhhh where is it?

Answer 9

I think your should try upping your vocabulary. Try using tremendously instead of a lot, things like that. Also here's a revision: In addition, my tracker was color coded with red being priority a yellow being priority b and orange being priority C. TO: In addition, my tracker was color coded with red being the color for the highest priority, yellow being the second most important, and yellow for the things of lest importance.
Just try fluffing up your words and vocabulary.

Answer 10

I'll look over it now, just give me a minute.

Answer 11

Here is the edited file, I messaged you the details.