Okay so i did 2.11 outline for english 2 on flvs but she said i did a first draft ..... Can anyone help me on how to do an outline ? I have no idea how....

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anonymous · Answer

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anonymous · Answer

yea i got u

anonymous · Answer

Oh my god thankyou so much!

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nobodyssalvation · Answer

Well the first draft would mean you wrote out a basic version of the essay rather than just a plan to write it.  

Your outline should include the title of the paper and a thesis statement.  Then you should list of three main ideas with at least 2 supporting details that you will discuss in the paragraph to support the main idea. FLVS teachers generally want you to list the main ideas as roman numerals, and supporting deaths with letters.  

Since you already wrote a first draft, you can look through that to fill out an outline.

anonymous · Answer

Yeah this is what she said 
 Hi Giulia,
Yes, this can be your rough draft. An outline must be show the main and supporting details that you plan to include in your paper.

It must be in outline format like shown in the lesson example:

I. 
A.
B.
II. A.
B.
C.
and so on...

nobodyssalvation · Answer

Exactly, so what did you need help with then?  Were you unable to figure out what you main ideas and details were?

anonymous · Answer

No its that i dont really know how to an outline in general ... Like is it okay just right it in ? Or does it have to be long ?

nobodyssalvation · Answer

It doesn't have to be long ago, depending on the topic you can do as little as a phrase or one short sentence to list the main ideas and details.  Your these has to be one complete sentence.  

For example, here is part of an outline I had to submit for my own FLVS class on the effect of advertisements on teenagers.  

TITLE:  Advertisements Influence Teen Self-Image
THESIS:  Advertisements targeting teenagers effectively draw attention, and persuade viewers to purchase suggested products, but fail to meet the standards for moral ethics.  
I.	The statistics and evaluation of advertisers and marketing
     A. Children and teenager influence family purchases and choices
     B. Brand loyalty and commercialization

I submitted just like that, labels and all, for the entire thing and got a full grade.

anonymous · Answer

Oh okay thankyou !

nobodyssalvation · Answer

You're welcome!