Question

Who's life is this?
What has life made me to be?
the person i have grown to be,
Livin' a lie my entire life
i don't know how much more i can take,
the bad is taking control of me,
Pot, Cigarettes, and alcohol,
taken over my life,
cant eat anymore because i don't feel good enough for society.
no friends, no family, nobody to turn or talk to,
no life, so hated and unwanted,
what has this life made me to be?

Answer 1

@GabbyCakes @abhisar @protected i know this is not the best but be honest on what you think...

Answer 2

omg it really good and surreal honestly

Answer 3

thank you (: @protected

Answer 4

@ilovehim121511 It's a very vivid and interesting poem. Very real, touching. I just hope this isn't what's happening to you <3

Answer 5

Thank you love! (: @GabbyCakes i appreciate it.

Answer 6

@ilovehim121511 no problem chica c:

Answer 7

@aegidious

Answer 8

I know you didn't ask for my opinion but that was amazing, it reminds me of my dad who destroyed my life with his substance abuse. But you can over come anything just watch! :)

Answer 9

i appreciate your feedback, i need as much opinions as i can get. (: and im sorry babygirl. and thank you a lot! (:

Answer 10

Really good. I love it. You're not that bad. You have some potential. Great job!

Answer 11

thank you honey. (: @Jumperman

Answer 12

I've never had someone call me honey before... that was new.

Answer 13

I've only ever been called babygirl by my bf so I'm like ok cool hahahhahaa I don't mind tho ahahahaha @Jumperman

Answer 14

oh.. lol sorry.

Answer 15

Really, it's fine. I'm just teasing you.

Answer 16

I don't mind it's cool ahhahahaha

Answer 17

@aryandecoolest @Rain_Dashie @country_princess @Monica75 @SarahEZZMcK @SamuelAlden917 @Preetha @AnnalieseBronz @mathmath333 @iambatman @TinkerbellGirl @victoria_lion @nirmalnema @Cesarv97 @christiansousley @sammixboo @lopezking1 @scburchell11 @Skyz

Answer 18

and awwe okay! (:

Answer 19

Its good i like it lots @ilovehim121511 *thumbs up* ;)

Answer 20

thank you @TinkerbellGirl

Answer 21

This is really awesome (:

Answer 22

\(\huge\bf wow..........\)

Answer 23

thank you @Destinycholie
And why wow? @mathmath333

Answer 24

depressing but eye-opening... 5 STARS!!! :D

Answer 25

awwh, thank you @elementwielder

Answer 26

your welcome... and i have a lot of friends who go through that... im not sure if the poem relates directly to you but if you need to talk... just pm me

Answer 27

i love it!

Answer 28

thank you @elementwielder
And awwh thank you you really did? @Cesarv97

Answer 29

Beautifully written, Comes from the heart, good grammar and when i read your work i can feel the emotion and love that you have put in to it. GREAT JOB!!!!!!

Answer 30

Thank you a lot honey!!! it makes me feel good to know that people actually like it.. i thought i did terrible.. @Marco,Phillip

Answer 31

your welcome... and you didnt do terrible

Answer 32

haha yes i did (: @ilovehim121511

Answer 33

well thank you. (: @elementwielder
&& good im glad you enjoyed it! >.< @Cesarv97

Answer 34

wow i completely forgot to medal you for the poem... i feel stupid XD

Answer 35

well frankly idk what to say but yeah the composition was good......and cheer up!!!!! Although life may not be easy now, in the end its all worth it. Everything will get better in time. So SMILE! :)
@ilovehim121511