Question

Life is like a lonely path
We strive to live but it never last
Life why do you put me thru this torment
All I ever wanted was comfort.
You killed the love inside me
Now I'm shriveled up like a willow tree
I weep and mourn, no one hears my cry
My life, helplessly it drifts, by and by

Answer 1

@Jumperman

Answer 2

Depressing.... but good.

Answer 3

Ya lol so is urs

Answer 4

Not as depressing.

Answer 5

@bpstation @DangerousJesse

Answer 6

@AngelWilliams16

Answer 7

Might I suggest adding a touch of happiness?

Answer 8

In my next one yes