Question

Another poem that I have to write.

Answer 1

All those times that I have tried
To show you something I have felt inside
And on top of all the lies
I can't seem to just get by

All the things I never said
All those lines that I never read
I wish I could live the life you've led
You have raised me from the dead

Tear away what I used to be
I promised you the world and I gave my love for free
You're my truth, please come to me
You're my the true one and only

You are everything I've wanted and needed
Man I feel so defeated
After all that I've done, I've turned and cheated
But, my love to you, you still receive it.

I can't tell you how much I love you
Words can't describe what I'm going through
You're everything, there is no limit to what you can do
I just want those words, I love you too



@Hotchellerae21

Answer 2

@alyssa_michelle1996 @Destinymasha @redeemed1312 @this-emo-kid9 @undeadknight26 @Whitemonsterbunny17 @DoShKa_SyRiA @Donblue22 @MilenaSaeger @TinkerbellGirl @AngelWilliams16

Answer 3

That's really good

Answer 4

Thanks.

Answer 5

Your welcome ^.^

Answer 6

@Destinycholie

Answer 7

@fateal

Answer 8

@DullJackel09

Answer 9

love it <3
keep up the goo work ;3

Answer 10

Goo work, hahaha.... made my day.

Answer 11

lel np x3 thats just me...my D's broke :')

Answer 12

Ouch, must hurt.

Answer 13

o.e not that D....im a girl :')
n yes ik... i read one of them ;3

Answer 14

I know, there was a contradiction in your question....

Answer 15

ik ;3 thats just me xD

Answer 16

Well, you seem pretty cool.

Answer 17

i meant that i read more of ur work.....

Answer 18

Oh... I think it was the relatable one where I got like.... 18 medals for.

Answer 19

oh nice ^^ goo job x3
keep it up xD
n lel ty x3 im just me :')

Answer 20

I am not sure if I should tag anymore, I tagged to much.

Answer 21

lel...tag n dont care :')
u got a talent n u need to let everybody know ;3

Answer 22

Well, if you think someone needs to read this whatever go ahead and tag them.

Answer 23

yes i do...but he doesnt come here v.v

Answer 24

Oh that sucks...

Answer 25

ikr??? :S but better...i dont wana remember him :'(

Answer 26

I'm sorry.

Answer 27

@girlover @VortexAlliby

Answer 28

its just that he was my birthday gift >.< lel i say that cus we dated after my birthday...n whats worse??? its my birthday on wed o.e too much to handle..its gonna b our 3rd year of being friends <3

Answer 29

will...im trying to get over him :/ goo luck with that to me :')

Answer 30

Well, I'm always here if you need someone to talk to.

Answer 31

awww...ty ^^ im fine for now :) i only need someone to cuddle with :') lel

Answer 32

I'll cuddle with you as a friend. I can't cheat on my girl.

Answer 33

all what i need to do is party ;3
n i just did xD

Answer 34

No, she won't because she will read this. So it's fine, it means that I'm a caring person. My heart and body belongs to her. I cuddle with my friends. I do more with her.

Answer 35

Not to be like sexual, that's not what I meant, I messed up dang it.

Answer 36

awwwwwww....lel...i understand what u mean :)
n thats cute n goo ^^
im fine alone for now....ill get married *hopefully* like around feb or so x3

Answer 37

who???

Answer 38

Nothing, not you fate.

Answer 39

oh ok...lel i was gonna say :') i mean no cares about me xD

Answer 40

I do.

Answer 41

but u care about ur gf more.... i want someone who only cares about me ouo

Answer 42

I understand. But I give my care to everyone. I care about everyone, in different ways. My gf isn't my gf, she's my wife.

Answer 43

awwwwww..... thats so cute <3
n umm ok x3 same here tho....

Answer 44

We're not legally married, we're just like.... so deeply in love that we are going to get married. I know she's the one. My prayers have been answered too many times.

Answer 45

awwww...thats so adorable <3 wish you luck :)
hope u guys last ^^

Answer 46

We definitely will.

Answer 47

goo luck with dat :)

Answer 48

@sahrya

Answer 49

Oh wow it's Sooo beautiful dear :)

Answer 50

Thanks. I'm going to go to sleep now, it's late here.

Answer 51

goo night :) dont let haters hurt you ;o

Answer 52

Nd btw umm may. I ask who in particular was this 4 o.O

Answer 53

It's for my gf, @Hotchellerae21. My Angel, love of my life. She's the one. I found out for sure today.

Answer 54

Sooo u nd her gonna b 2gether 4evr huh :)

Answer 55

Yep. Forever, inseparable.

Answer 56

Oh ok well...ur a good man :) nd tell her that I said she better treat u rite lol

Answer 57

I have a poem also I would like 2 share but...I gtg 2 bed soon lol

Answer 58

Good nite y'all bye :)

Answer 59

Great job !!

Answer 60

Wow!!! This is such a loving poem! Wonderful! :)

Answer 61

How did you find it?

Answer 62

Really good!!!!!!!!!!! Keep it up, i enjoy reading them!

Answer 63

Daw so sweet!! Lovers poem

Answer 64

Thanks.

Answer 65

THAT WAS GREAT!!!!! SO Inspirational!!! I really liked it! Good Job ^-^*

Answer 66

Really amazing i love it can't wait for the next one!!

Answer 67

If there is a next one.

Answer 68

awww, why wouldn't there be?

Answer 69

Because I'm terrible at writing this stuff.

Answer 70

no your not you just need to bost your confidence

Answer 71

With what?

Answer 72

with your writing

Answer 73

No I mean, what am I supposed to boost my confidence with? A confidence booster pill?

Answer 74

no you just have to understand that if you don't start having confidence things go crazy and it might seem that way now but later on it will you just have to put your self out there

Answer 75

I don't think I can.

Answer 76

you will be able to it will come to you!! Just keep doing what you are doing things will be fine.

Answer 77

@k_lynn

Answer 78

@k_lynn

Answer 79

gots it on my desktop =.

Answer 80

and this is why. you two are made for each other. pure love.