Question

ow can I say " A fire burned within me" to describe that I got offended and angry inside without sounding so stupid?

Answer 1

A fire sparked within me, A rage burned inside of me, My face felt like fire.

A fire burned within me doesn't sound stupid.

Answer 2

when I asked in Arabic what that meant he said “Don’t worry you’ll never get one” offended I asked why and he said “You can’t even speak English” that moment a fire burned within me and without even knowing what that meant I knew I had to get one to prove him wrong,

Answer 3

oh ok so replace it with a raged burned within me?

Answer 4

@Basher

Answer 5

Sure, whatever you think fits the best.

Answer 6

ok thanks!

Answer 7

do you want to read my essay, its 500 words

Answer 8

Sure

Answer 9

Ok thanks!

Answer 10

I will send it to you when Im done :) @Basher

Answer 11

Cool. Thank you.