Question

The earth beneath me is crumbling,
The sun is almost out.
The sky is close to falling,
The human race is full of doubt.

My room is cold,
As well as my as hands,
The floor like hard stone,
I hear my tears as they land.

I sit in quietness,
As the darkness stabs like knives.
No light to be seen,
And it’s not even night.

The rain pours down
And pounds like hail.
Lightning strikes,
& the thunder rolls on.

Is this the end of the world?
Maybe not.
Is it the end of mine?
That depends on life’s clock.

Answer 1

I drop down,
Sobbing in tears.
The time has come,
To face, my worst fear.
Darkness, is what I run from.
I have a feeling, that it is not done.

My heart feels like a thousand needles,
Piercing every second,
My heart keeps beating,
The devil has sent it.

My pulse, is at the
Point of exploding.
My mind, is at the
Point of knowing.

I can go on,
But what if I don’t?
My heart of gold
Has turned to stone.

I’m looking for someone,
To take me out of this place.
I bet no one will,
I’m such a disgrace.

But if someone happens to come,
I will go on, like I was meant to.
I will live like I will forever.
I will Never Say Never.

Answer 2

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Answer 3

O_O hmmm great Job ^_^ @GabbyCakes

Answer 4

<3 when you write, you relate to a lot of people:) good job

Answer 5

nice one.... specially the line "I hear my tears as they land."....

Answer 6

true that ^

Answer 7

this part too "My heart feels like a thousand needles, Piercing every second,"

Answer 8

i felt it, not just through my eyes but into my soul, i felt it in my heart, i understood this completely, it was dark and soo beautiful. <3

Answer 9

@just_one_last_goodbye thanks :3
@Monica75 yay :3 i love that you love it.
@paki thank you for reading :)
@leanneGoth im so glad i wrote this poem now cx

Answer 10

Love it! That's amazing. I can't write poetry even if my life depended on it. It's really hard and I really like your poem.

Answer 11

amazing^,^

Answer 12

Cool! I wrote my first poem today! :D

Answer 13

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@GabbyCakes