Question

HELLO !:) so i wrote a rough draft and i am very good at writing. Its time for the essay but the teacher said "Comments:
Good draft!! You don't need to introduce what you will be writing about. Just begin (:" So can someone change it up a bit for me

Answer 1

IF anyones willing to change it up a bit ill post it, but if not i wont post it yet

Answer 2

@GabbyCakes

Answer 3

@AuroraB

Answer 4

I'll read it over and let you know

Answer 5

okay you can change if you need to. can i delete now bfor everyone sees my work

Answer 6

yeah I got it open

Answer 7

okay thanks

Answer 8

all she said was:
Comments:
Good draft!! You don't need to introduce what you will be writing about. Just begin (:

Answer 9

I think what she's talking about is how you elaborate that you're "about" to explain what you wanna talk about. Do you understand...?

Answer 10

yeah so just take that out? do i needa add anything

Answer 11

I believe that's all you have to take out, everything else is Extravagant :D

Answer 12

Thanks

Answer 13

You're welcome hun!!

Answer 14

That all you needed?

Answer 15

yes thank you:)