Question

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Answer 1

Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. You may need to create additional details or information. Use proper spelling and grammar.

Leah grabbed her purse and got on the bus. She pulled out her phone to text her friend. Someone on the bus asked her about her phone. The bus arrived at the mall, and Leah got out. She had forgotten her purse!

Answer 2

Leah grabbed her purse and got on the bus. Then she sat down and pulled out her phone to text her friend. Looking around her - The bus seemed to be empty. She felt a bit worried - But her friends messages kept her a occupied. Then - Out of the blue - A boy came out of nowhere! Leah was shocked! Not only did the boy come out of nowhere - But he sat right by her! Not knowing who the boy was - Leah began to sweat and turn pale. But it seemed that the boy only wanted to ask her about her phone! A sigh of relief for Leah. They talked for what seemed like years - About the phone - About school - And about themselves! Shockingly - It looks like the boys name was Max - Just like Leah's brothers name! At first Leah was quite scared - But knowing more about Max made her feel at ease.
Then - The bus finally arrived at the mall - And Leah got out. She waved goodbye to Max who waved goodbye to her. As the bus got further and further away - Leah noticed something! She had forgotten her purse!

Answer 3

thx but i know this was someones else already read it so i cant turn it in.