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anonymous · Answer

Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. You may need to create additional details or information. Use proper spelling and grammar.

Leah grabbed her purse and got on the bus. She pulled out her phone to text her friend. Someone on the bus asked her about her phone. The bus arrived at the mall, and Leah got out. She had forgotten her purse!

anonymous · Answer

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@iGreen

igreen · Answer

Leah grabbed her purse and got on the bus. She pulled out her phone to text her friend. Someone on the bus asked her about her phone. The bus arrived at the mall, and Leah got out. She had forgotten her purse!

You can revise it like:

Leah grabbed her purse and got on the bus. She pulled out her phone to text her friend, when suddenly someone asked her about her phone. The bus arrived at the mall and Leah got out, before she knew it, she had forgotten her purse!

anonymous · Answer

thank you sry about late response my computer had to restart @iGreen