OpenStudy (anonymous):

help please

3 years ago
OpenStudy (anonymous):

write a story with (exposition,rising action,climax,falling action, and resolution)

3 years ago
OpenStudy (anonymous):

@math&ing001 @Gatorgirl @anonymous_user

3 years ago
OpenStudy (anonymous_user):

I cannot write your story for you. But, if you need it edited I'll be happy to do that for you.

3 years ago
OpenStudy (anonymous):

ok thats fine ill write give me some time

3 years ago
OpenStudy (anonymous):

well here is my first draft

3 years ago
OpenStudy (anonymous):

Todays the day all of our family goes to bush gardens. I rushed out of bed smelling the scent of bacon and eggs in the air. So I ran Headed straight to the kitchen for breakfast until my mom stopped me asking did I make up my bed, brush my teeth so I replied no. After getting myself together the whole family sat down at the table so eat and I even got to drink from the cup with my name on it (Kye). So when we departed on the journey to theme park I couldn’t image how big the rollercoasters were going to be. Would they be as tall as the clouds, or would they be scary. When we parked then brought our tickets to enter the amazing Busch gardens, I heard my say Kye look at that rollercoaster. So I gazed at how big it was and I couldn’t find the end of the ride at sight so immediately I got frightened. When we finally got to the first and biggest rollercoaster of the day called shekria we got in line and the suspense and excitement was over whelming. Finally we boarded the ride and the wait was over we strapped in secured the harness and away we was climbing to the top if felt like years but still it got my earth bumping like I was running a marathon. Then we crest of the ride and zooooooom we went down. I could feel my breakfast coming back up, but I was able to keep it down we went zip zag thru the turns barrel roll and even thru water. Then finally I felt the breaks and I flew forward but the harness kept me seated. Then I came to my senses of what just happened everyone was happy waving their arms. And when we got off the ride I felt noxious but was able to regain my senses, so we continued on through the day having fun at the amazing bush gardens.

3 years ago
OpenStudy (anonymous):

@anonymous_user

3 years ago
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