Question

PLEASE ANSWER
Feedback on my song lyrics?
It's a love song and a break up song.

Answer 1

Verse 1:
You say you're sorry
I don't see it
You say you still care
Not like you used to
You say you're sorry
I don't believe you
Let's remember the good times
While they're still in our minds
Let's forget about the bad times
And try again to last

Chorus:
I don't know why I can't find you
I don't know how I can love you
I can't find you

Verse 2:
You say you're trying
I don't see it
You say you love me
Not like you used to
You say you're sorry
I don't believe you
Let's start over
While we can
Let's begin to love again
And try again to last

Chorus

Bridge:
Now you're messing with my head
Now you're running out of bed
Just give up before you try
That's all I hear from your lie

Chorus

Answer 2

I'll explain what they mean if you need me too :)

Answer 3

i think they are good

Answer 4

Thanks

Answer 5

@sleepyhead314 Please read my lyrics

Answer 6

it's good ;P
but I'm not good with english related aspects of education stuffz things...
I has my brain hard wired for picking out math and music (sound) mistakes :P
not much I can do for you when it comes to english
looks good to me xP
maybe I'll have something to say once u try to put notes to it and sing it ;)

Answer 7

ITS REALLY GOOD

Answer 8

I love it are you a writer

Answer 9

try to put notes to the words decide if its going to be high or low get together with a friend and have him/her sing the corous or post yourself singing it on you tube and I can help put notes to the words but you are a writerand keep working my youtube channel is starstruck11 I can help im in choir :)

Answer 10

Beautiful i love it! keep it going... it looks great:)

Answer 11

i love it

Answer 12

@sleepyhead314 Oh, lol okay well I'll record myself for you :)
@m&m&m I'm in choir too. I have the notes to it already I just wanted feed back on the lyrics before I recorded myself.
To everyone else THANKS!

Answer 13

AMAZING<3

Answer 14

awesome

Answer 15

good

Answer 16

I like it.
Very good :)

Answer 17

Thank you all

Answer 18

that's pretty legit im just sayin

Answer 19

I love this. :D

Answer 20

THANKS EVERYONE