Question

okay so i wrote this poem

Answer 1

I listen
I yell
It taunts me, it haunts me
The inspiration that never came.
I want it, I need it
though it does not want me, it does not need me
I was young
and also dumb
I should have listened to my loved ones
The ones that told me to wait inspiration
and Inspiration shall come
but I wouldn't wait, I couldn’t wait
Instead I pursued it
For days, nay, weeks!
I chased and chased
The inspiration that NEVER came.
And this day that I know speak
I step and listen to the floorboards creak.
I watch the birds fly off into the distance
It reminds me when I couldn't resist it
The urge to find,
The Inspiration that NERVER came.
So I wait,
Yet I know it will never come
And it will never stay,
The Inspiration that NEVER came...

Answer 2

Thats really good !!

Answer 3

awsommeee

Answer 4

thx guys!

Answer 5

thats nice

Answer 6

It took me few days to finish

Answer 7

well, you did very good

Answer 8

thank you...

Answer 9

Is this where you posted it? http://stories.k12.com/node/5010

Answer 10

ya @Conqueror its is but this one is a bit longer....

Answer 11

that's very good. i'm not much a poem person, but i like it.

Answer 12

thx @Kidthatbro8

Answer 13

nice that could be a song