Question

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Need Help on my story!
Im not very sure if this sentence makes sense..

"He’s a worthless creature that tries to run through me with a rhino each time I am online.”

Answer 1

to me it make sense

Answer 2

same with me

Answer 3

Makes sense just don't understand your meaning

Answer 4

Well I'm writing a story and I wasnt sure if it made sense..but ill put the whole paragraph so you guys can understand it :)

Answer 5

“I’m just worried that he is just using me to talk to so he can be entertained.” “Why would you care if he was doing that?” I shrugged.
“I really don’t know.” “I think you like him.” said Lauren.
“Why would I like him? He’s a worthless creature that tries to run through me with a rhino each time I am online.” I said. To be honest, I should have reported Aiden when he was messing with me. He would have been told by a moderator for harassing me in the chat box. I decided against reporting him for some strange reason but, it was worth it I guess. I have a person to talk to when I want to talk to him or when he wants to talk to me.
“You love it when he does the rhino thing though. It makes you laugh nonstop. I remember when he first was being a rhino and you were confused. You were considering whether to report him or not and you ended up not reporting him. You are way too kind. Maybe he likes a sweet girl who is kind and pure. You should get back to your friend as soon as possible.” said Lauren. “We’re not friends at all. It’s more like he is a rhino and I’m his favorite toy. He loves trying to destroy me with it. There must be some sort of weird imagination that goes on in his head.” “Yeah, one where he is a rhino and has to run over everything in his path.”

Answer 6

*claps*

Answer 7

good job :)

Answer 8

Thanks :)
So its does it makes sense?

Answer 9

yes :)

Answer 10

yup

Answer 11

yess :D

Answer 12

Okay thanks again! :)
I wasn't so sure about it but thanks guys :)