Question

here's a poem that i wrote a long time ago and i want to see what people think of it, i'm taking advice from a friend of mine and posting it on here...

Friendship, Love, and Trust
The moon is shining bright
and there's a twinkle in your eyes.
The twinkle in your eyes is so
adorable that I cry with tears of joy.
Having you by me all this time is the
most precious gift you can give me.
No one has ever been by my side for as
long as you've been, except my family of course.
It's hard to show how exactly how much
I deeply love you though, cuz I haven't seen\you in a long time.

Answer 1

This is a lovely poem! I like it...

Answer 2

thanks teddy

Answer 3

You're welcome @ravengirl

Answer 4

awesome job

Answer 5

thanks jessie

Answer 6

nice one.... superb...

Answer 7

thanks paki :)

Answer 8

Looks alright. You should post more here.

Answer 9

i like it c:

Answer 10

NotTim i've been thinking about doing that :)

Answer 11

thank you Kidthatbro8