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OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

Hey everyone, Anyone tell me a good headline for my essay My best Friend?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

what does headline mean

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

a heading at the top of an article or page in a newspaper or magazine.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

u mean starting

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

yeah

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

The first line of the essay

OpenStudy (anonymous):

although I know numbers of people around me, include my relatives, family neabours and friends. But there is someone much closer to me as closer as my family member is (Name)___ my best for from ___year or class.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

If u don't like like it then tell me..............

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I'll send 1 or 2 more

OpenStudy (anonymous):

please tell me

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

Can you please send me any other?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

wait I m thinking

OpenStudy (anonymous):

What is your grade

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

11

OpenStudy (anonymous):

There is some one special for every one, can be of u also. Same case is with me I also have someone special even more special, even special then my all friends as special as gold. That gold is (Name)_______ my best friend ever.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Well........., which is your country?

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

Canada

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Did u like it or still..........

OpenStudy (anonymous):

?

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

Like I almost finish it but still I am missing some lines

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

Can you please read my essay one time?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Well my grade is 7......... so I helped u as much as I can.........

OpenStudy (anonymous):

yes please

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

So that you can tell me what I am missing?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

yes please send me your letter

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

But please don't make a fun of my grammer because I am new to Canada and my english is not too well.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I have not under stand grammer till my 4th grade even my spells are also not good so how can I make fun of u and what is name of country in which u born.......?

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

Pakistan

OpenStudy (anonymous):

me too....... from Pakistan Pakistan Zindabad

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

In which country are you?

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

nice dear

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

I love Pakistan

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

Which city?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

and I want to tell u that u should not start your essay from direct sentence...... because our teacher say it spoil your writting.......... start with a sentence that grab attention of the reader................

OpenStudy (anonymous):

mere shehar Lahore hai....... our ap ka......

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

Sargodha

OpenStudy (anonymous):

from balochistan or sindh

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

Punjab

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

3 hour drive from lahore

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

I remember

OpenStudy (anonymous):

tay fair assi punjabi wich gal karday aan

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

I don't known punjabi well sorry

OpenStudy (anonymous):

no, it's okay................ non of your fault

OpenStudy (anonymous):

your essay is quit good but need of suspence

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

ok but how can I get that suspence

OpenStudy (anonymous):

my internet signal are not good I am unable to make your fan so will u please be my fan..........

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

yeah sure

OpenStudy (anonymous):

okay and thanks to u............

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

First time I meet with any Pakistani person own this web

OpenStudy (anonymous):

we can have live call on skype or facebook. If u like then will u send me your facebook ID.

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

What is your name?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I have also meet any pakistani first time from a foriegn country

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

and what you do?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

My name is Mutayyab Abid Mughal I am student of class 7 in Ivars High School What's your name please

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

Talha

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

Bro Your english is so well

OpenStudy (anonymous):

thank yaar

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I have listen that sagodian's are much intellegent........... Is it so?

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

I don't maybe

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

sorry I don't no maybe

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

or maybe its our personal thinking

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

What about Imran Khan and Azadi Marach?

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

bro help me with essay?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

uf tauba, wo to sirf retriceifa hi mang raha hai....... kah raha hai k nawas sarif retriceifa dai ga to jaun ga...... chahan retriceifa 1month k liya hi kiun na hai....... our Tahir-ul-qadri kah raha hai k damocrasic nizam khatam karo assembian khatam karo our naya nizam lao just like cataphate movement

OpenStudy (anonymous):

khalafati doar

OpenStudy (anonymous):

sorry retricelfa = ressign

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

hey help me with essay

OpenStudy (anonymous):

mai ap k essay may changes kar raha hun

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

ok

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

and also please provide some more details

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

hey

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

Are you there?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

yes I m here changing some detail of your essay

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I remember one thing when I felling down on the floor and then he help me

OpenStudy (anonymous):

what does this line mean?

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

Like the mean of his line line is that he is very caring one day we both went to a mall and other I fell down on the floor because the floor was wet and then we help me my picking me up.

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

Did you understand that line mean or not?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

yes

OpenStudy (anonymous):

no need to mention his perent's job It may spoll your essay

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

ok

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

but Like I have to write the essay in 800 words that why I write the parents job

OpenStudy (anonymous):

and no need to describe side roll person much just, make sure u are giving enough information about him in two or one line

OpenStudy (anonymous):

dear Talha, 800 works are only for checking you or it's for weaker ones I don't think u r a weaker one, the main porpose of essay is to chech your ability if u fulfil the requirments in 600 words u can get muck god marks

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

Bro It is my assignment

OpenStudy (anonymous):

same case was with me I wrote a essay of 400 word in a conpitition in our school wherever requirment was of 550 words but it stool as 1st in our class and 2nd in our school, it's just about to chech how u r able........

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

if I did do it in 800 words then they will deduct my marks

OpenStudy (anonymous):

u mean did not

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

Bro I am not in Pakistan. Its Canada

OpenStudy (anonymous):

i have did some changings check and change where ever u want

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

yeah like if I don't do it in 800 words then they will deduct my marks

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

Over here English is so hard

OpenStudy (anonymous):

my dear brother while in am in canada WE ALL STUDENT FROM CLASS 4 USE TO GIVE ONLINE PAPER TO UK AND THEY ARE CHECK OVER THERE

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I'll HELP U WITH AS MUCH ENGLIDH I KNOW...............

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

ok so

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I am doing some changings

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

ok

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