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OpenStudy (anonymous):

Can you pleaaaase help me out?! @uri

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@thomaster

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@amistre64 can you pleeaaaasseee help me?!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@Cosmichaotic

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I really need help can u please help me? @mikkel900

OpenStudy (firejay5):

what do you need help with @iamabarbiegirl

OpenStudy (anonymous):

hold on, sorry i'll get the work

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I need help on outlining my argument for is brutus a betrayer or a patriot

OpenStudy (anonymous):

And i need help organizing it in this specific format : I. Choose topic A. Brainstorm ideas of interest B.Conduct preliminary research C.Decide on a specific topic II. Research topic A.Consult only reliable and credible sources B.Take notes C.Record source information III. Organize information A.Sort evidence B.Decide on an organizational pattern C.Use an organizational tool IV. Draft ideas A.Write a first draft B.Read it out loud C.Make necessary changes V. Revise draft A.Evaluate content and organization B.Evaluate word choice and sentence variety C.Read it out loud

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@Firejay5

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@mikkel900

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@Jesstho.-. please help me?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

but it's not in the format i need help doing it in @Firejay5

OpenStudy (firejay5):

OpenStudy (anonymous):

thats a different assignment.. read the format I'm supposed to put it in that I've just sent to u please @Firejay5

OpenStudy (firejay5):

Use this chart to help organize your thoughts into that out-line

OpenStudy (anonymous):

it really doesn't help i've tried.. :/

OpenStudy (anonymous):

can u plz tag other people to help me out? i REALLY need help with this one..

OpenStudy (anonymous):

i need to put it in that format and I'm having a hard time!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@Zarkon PLEAASEE help meee!!

OpenStudy (firejay5):

What's your topic

OpenStudy (firejay5):

chose one you want to argue against

OpenStudy (anonymous):

is brutus a betrayer or a patriot.

OpenStudy (firejay5):

pick one is he a betrayer or a patriot using the chart that I gave you will help you decide

OpenStudy (anonymous):

betrayer.

OpenStudy (firejay5):

research = How is he a betrayer? Hint Hint: Use chart

OpenStudy (anonymous):

what does this mean? A. Brainstorm ideas of interest B.Conduct preliminary research C.Decide on a specific topic

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@Firejay5

OpenStudy (firejay5):

brainstorm a suggest of someone or something (Define idea and interest)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@undeadknight26 pleaaaasee heelppp mee!

OpenStudy (firejay5):

I am your best chance

OpenStudy (anonymous):

it's not really helpful what ur giving me if ur just gonna give me files i've already done.. i would've done this by myself in the first place.. but it's hard understanding everythingg

OpenStudy (anonymous):

what type of help do u need?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

helping me put it in that format please. @mutayyababidmughal

OpenStudy (anonymous):

what can I do for u??

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I. Choose topic A. Brainstorm ideas of interest B.Conduct preliminary research C.Decide on a specific topic II. Research topic A.Consult only reliable and credible sources B.Take notes C.Record source information III. Organize information A.Sort evidence B.Decide on an organizational pattern C.Use an organizational tool IV. Draft ideas A.Write a first draft B.Read it out loud C.Make necessary changes V. Revise draft A.Evaluate content and organization B.Evaluate word choice and sentence variety C.Read it out loud

OpenStudy (anonymous):

We're supposed to outline our argument about is brutus a betrayer or a patriot using the format i have above

OpenStudy (anonymous):

will u please use simple english................

OpenStudy (anonymous):

My work is to do this: I. Choose topic A. Brainstorm ideas of interest B.Conduct preliminary research C.Decide on a specific topic II. Research topic A.Consult only reliable and credible sources B.Take notes C.Record source information III. Organize information A.Sort evidence B.Decide on an organizational pattern C.Use an organizational tool IV. Draft ideas A.Write a first draft B.Read it out loud C.Make necessary changes V. Revise draft A.Evaluate content and organization B.Evaluate word choice and sentence variety C.Read it out loud

OpenStudy (anonymous):

which topic u have select.....?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

my topic is: is brutus a betrayer or a patriot

OpenStudy (anonymous):

okay I see.....

OpenStudy (anonymous):

yes :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

have u done It or stuck.....?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

i am stuck and need someone's help

OpenStudy (anonymous):

your grade

OpenStudy (anonymous):

can u please help me? I need to turn it in in an hour.. and I haven't even started

OpenStudy (anonymous):

if cannot please let me know so I'm not wasting my time.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

okay sorry, may I send u an essay........? please

OpenStudy (anonymous):

for what?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

of your topic

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Is it of sheekspear's novel........

OpenStudy (anonymous):

u have stuck where

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@undeadknight26 OMG!! PLEAASEE SAVE MEE!!

undeadknight26 (undeadknight26):

Do you still need help ma'am?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

yes, sir :)

undeadknight26 (undeadknight26):

Alright missy :) I seem to not have this brutus...is this the brutus connected to Julius Ceasar? Can you give me some information on him?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

yes, it is :D from willian shakespeares novel. You're right!

undeadknight26 (undeadknight26):

*rubs hands together* Im not usually doing work on here during the weekends...So lets see if i can get out of break mode haha!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I know everything about them sir lol but for this assignment I'm supposed to put it in the format below:

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I. Choose topic A. Brainstorm ideas of interest B.Conduct preliminary research C.Decide on a specific topic II. Research topic A.Consult only reliable and credible sources B.Take notes C.Record source information III. Organize information A.Sort evidence B.Decide on an organizational pattern C.Use an organizational tool IV. Draft ideas A.Write a first draft B.Read it out loud C.Make necessary changes V. Revise draft A.Evaluate content and organization B.Evaluate word choice and sentence variety C.Read it out loud

OpenStudy (anonymous):

and my topic is about: is Brutus a betrayer or a patriot :D

undeadknight26 (undeadknight26):

This sounds like a challenging assignment... I cannot give you the answer yet i can hint you off...since i of course know like 0% of this stuff haha...

OpenStudy (anonymous):

lol it is challenging.. and I need to have this in an hour.. :/ so I'm very frustrated.

undeadknight26 (undeadknight26):

Lawdy lawd...Why in de flips you wait so late XD

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I didn't.. I was trying to get help with this for so long.. and no one was able to.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

can u please tag anyone that'll be able to help me! :/ I'm very stressed out about this or inbox anyone?

undeadknight26 (undeadknight26):

I see. Well no worry XD This 10th grader will give it his all ma'am! Give me some stuff that brutus did :D Like Spoke out here and there...or fought so and so...or argued with a sheep or something!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

hahaha I will give you all the info you need! we're all in this together! hahah thank you sooo much!

undeadknight26 (undeadknight26):

@texaschic101 @thomaster @uri @ParthKohli @dumbsearch2 @ganeshie8 @jhonyy9 @kirbykirby @Zale101 @Cosmichaotic

undeadknight26 (undeadknight26):

OS is a tad bit messed up so they wont find this link for a long time lol.

undeadknight26 (undeadknight26):

Gimme all da info you can :D

OpenStudy (anonymous):

okayy! here's a summary of everything! http://www.history.com/this-day-in-history/the-ides-of-march-julius-caesar-is-murdered

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I'm really sorry hope that helped..

undeadknight26 (undeadknight26):

*stares* Not much info here but from this..they would be criminals would they not?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

yes well brutus would because him and caesar were "friends" and that's why my topic here is about: is Brutus a betrayer or a patriot

OpenStudy (anonymous):

and from that we're supposed to fill in the format.

undeadknight26 (undeadknight26):

He would be a betrayer who would be an accomplice in murder to me...I actually have to leave now so ;-; Really its all about research which you have.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@paki brother can u pease help me?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@Zale101

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@dan815

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@Brainybeauty

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@cj49

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@cj49 can u please help mee?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

pleasee guysss help mee!!! :(

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@Zale101

OpenStudy (cj49):

lemme try..

OpenStudy (cj49):

In my Outline, I will answer the question that has been debated for so long: 'Is Brutus a betrayer or a patriot?' With all the information on Brutus, the video, and the speeches, I believe he is a patriot. Brutus stands up for Rome and honors Rome because he kills Caesar to save Rome. At the Battle of Philippi, Brutus kills himself because he had done all that he could do for Rome. He had tried his best and now was defeated-he gave his life for Rome. One may disagree with me because he did deceive some of the fellow leaders of Rome and he did kill Caesar but Brutus only did this for Rome's sake. He killed Caesar because Caesar was leading Rome in the wrong direction. He lied to the leaders because it was the only way he knew how to make Rome the highest city. I. Introduction III. Claim IV. Conclusion One thing that stuck out to me was that it showed that he killed himself at the end...this means that he had been a patriot all along. One may ask, "So you have both reasons why he could be a betrayer or a patriot...which one is it?" Brutus is a patriot because like I said before, all Brutus' plans evolved around saving Rome. Killing Caesar, deceiving people of Rome, Battle of Philippi... all these were for saving Rome. Rome is Brutus' god...he gave everything for Rome. II. Counterclaim Right after Caesar was killed, Brutus and Antony give a speech. In these speeches, I would agree that Brutus is a betrayer and Antony is a patriot. Brutus' speech seemed a little fake and short- almost as if he was glad Caesar was dead. Brutus also states that the people should believe in him for killing Caesar and that all the honor goes to himself. Antony, on the other hand, gives a much more realistic/ heart-feeling speech that doesn't focus the attention on just Caesar, but also the man who killed Caesar-Brutus. I would consider Brutus as a betrayer when he lied to his fellow citizens. He lied to them to kill Caesar but from just watching that part, I thought that he was surly a betrayer. People on the same side should agree and be in it together. When Brutus betrayer his own people-he was considered a betrayer. When Brutus killed Caesar, I thought 'Surely Brutus is a betrayer because he killed his own emperor!' This set me off guard because when someone kills his own king, they are obviously on the opposite side. This would mean that Brutus was, again, a betrayer-at least when he killed Caesar. Little did I know that Brutus did this to save Rome!

OpenStudy (cj49):

First of all, Brutus made the right choice by killing Caesar because Caesar would've hurt Rome and made Rome fall. Brutus loved Rome and he didn't want to see Rome go under. The only thing Brutus could possible do was...kill Caesar. By killing Caesar, Brutus actually saved Rome from Caesars plans for falling Rome. Second of all, I could tell Brutus was a patriot when he went to the Battle of Philippi. He fought with all he had and in the end...he was defeated miserable. Brutus was so distraught for Rome that he killed himself. Brutus gave everything...even his life for Rome. This proves that he is a patriot. I don't know if any-one else had noticed but all Brutus' plans evolved around saving Rome. Killing Caesar, deceiving people of Rome, Battle of Philippi... all these were for saving Rome. All these mean that Brutus is a patriot!

OpenStudy (cj49):

prezi.com/ay5lxmweqhzz/my-outline-argument/

OpenStudy (anonymous):

That's one of the closest answer i've gotten so far, but only problem is I'm supposed to fill in using this format : I. Choose topic A. Brainstorm ideas of interest B.Conduct preliminary research C.Decide on a specific topic II. Research topic A.Consult only reliable and credible sources B.Take notes C.Record source information III. Organize information A.Sort evidence B.Decide on an organizational pattern C.Use an organizational tool IV. Draft ideas A.Write a first draft B.Read it out loud C.Make necessary changes V. Revise draft A.Evaluate content and organization B.Evaluate word choice and sentence variety C.Read it out loud @cj49

OpenStudy (anonymous):

sooo stressful ugh!

OpenStudy (cj49):

they are just guidelines. A.brain stroming means discussing the ideas b.Conduct preliminary research means finalizing the topic....so all those things are just guidelines.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Yeah, but not in an essay like for A brainstorm ideas of interest I'm supposed to list one.

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