Give feedback on biology question?
this is math :/
I know. /: I didn't want to post here and be annoying, but I really needed feedback and no one answered in the bio section.
its fine
are both of the, your answers?
My answers are the bottom 2.
in answer 1 you have 1 punctuation error and id go with 2
oh ok
sorry for my misunderstanding
Is the punctuation error where I said 'no, I would not eat the crops' where I put the comma? It's fine (:
yes right there it should be like this altered with. No, I would
a period after with
Oh ok. Thanks
np and the second one is good but in the first one you don't seem as confident
Ok, good point. I'm not :P Do you have any ideas as to what I could add?
i would take out im not sure and put I have no knowledge of the harms that come with the chemical
in question 1
Yea, that sounds a lot better. (: That it?
I asked my mom and she said she to put Even though almost everything we eat on a daily basis is chemically altered with, I would not eat the crops.
Ok. Tell her thank you! That sounds better too.
lol that is what i said and she says your welcome
My words get jumbled a lot and it comes out sounding stupid lol
lol
Thank you so much, I really appreciate the help! :D
tell me if you get it right :3
I will as soon as my teacher grades it (:
cool lol
rofl this has basically turned into a chat box XD
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