Question

help me plz will Fan and meadal. i need help with the last few sentences:
Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. You may need to create additional details or information. Use proper spelling and grammar.

Leah grabbed her purse and got on the bus. She pulled out her phone to text her friend. Someone on the bus asked her about her phone. The bus arrived at the mall, and Leah got out. She had forgotten her purse!

Leah had to get on the bus to got to the mall. while on the bus she starts texting a friend she had a really nice iphone she got for her birthday a few month

Answer 1

@justsmile531 @rocky1718 help me someone @hotdancingbabe14 @Mandre

Answer 2

like do u have to correct words ??

Answer 3

llike i need to finsh rewriting the second paragrph the 3 is what i have

Answer 4

ok i got u

Answer 5

nvm i have what i want

Answer 6

ok

Answer 7

here is what i have
Leah had to get on the bus to got to the mall. while on the bus she starts texting a friend she had a really nice iphone she got for her birthday a few months ago. She already wanted a new one for her next birthday.W hen the bus arrived she got out and went to bells to look for some shoes that she thought she loved. She went on to buy them a little bit later and couldn't find her purse finally. she remembered she had left it in the bus

Answer 8

heres the answer:)
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