Please look over and see if i did this correct, will give a medal.

Revise the following sentence so that is uses parallel structure. Use proper spelling and grammar.

I am talented at writing, sports and I play music.

My thoughts were:

I am talented at writing, sports and music, Is this correct?

Question

Please look over and see if i did this correct, will give a medal.

Revise the following sentence so that is uses parallel structure.  Use proper spelling and grammar.

I am talented at writing, sports and I play music.

My thoughts were:

I am talented at writing, sports and music,  Is this correct?

anonymous · Answer

@rockstar349002 will you please look at this for me

rockstar349002 · Answer

sure

rockstar349002 · Answer

hold on let me read it first when i said sure that wasn't saying that it was right LOL

anonymous · Answer

Ok i didn't think you had read it yet, thank you

rockstar349002 · Answer

Yep that seems correct.

anonymous · Answer

thanks again.  you are awesome.

rockstar349002 · Answer

Your welcome!

anonymous · Answer

No. It is not correct.

anonymous · Answer

It is 

I am talented at writing, sports, and music.

anonymous · Answer

There is always a comma before the "and".

anonymous · Answer

Thank you @Basher