Question

(I'll give a medal)

Select the temporal transition that would be best to show relationship.

A. "In a flash..."
B. "In the distance..."
C. "In the same way..." (I picked C)
D. "All of the sudden..."

Answer 1

I think C

Answer 2

Select the dialogue that is punctuated properly.

A. "Let's go to the movies tonight," she said. "There are some good ones out." (I picked this)
B. "Let's go to the movies tonight." She said. "There are some good ones out."
C. "Let's go to the movies tonight", she said. "There are some good ones out".
D. "Let's go to the movies tonight," She said, There are some good ones out.

Answer 3

I have three more that I have done, do you have time to check them to make sure I'm right?

Answer 4

YES

Answer 5

I think A

Answer 6

In dialogue, you should start a new paragraph every time.

A. a new speaker says something. (I picked this)
B. a question gets asked.
C. a decision gets made.
D. a speaker insults someone else.

Answer 7

A

Answer 8

Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. You may need to create additional details or information. Use proper spelling and grammar.

Darius went to the store. He wanted food. He ran into his teacher there. They talked about his latest project. He decided to base his project on gourmet cooking.

(I think)
Darius ran into his teacher at his local grocery store, and they chatted about his class project. Their conversation made him decide to do his project about gourmet cooking.

Answer 9

Yes I think so too

Answer 10

Invent dialogue and revise the following paragraph. Use proper spelling and grammar.

Ashley talked to his family for hours about how much he wanted a puppy. It took them forever, but they finally gave in.

(What I wrote)
Ashley spoke to his family for several hours, about how much he wanted a puppy.

"I don't think you'll have time to care for the puppy," said his mother.
"Your mom is right Ashley. You hang out with your friends and have a bunch of school work to do!" said his father.
"You are so behind! Not only in school work but doing your chores too!" shouted his sister.
"I promise I'll do my chores! I'll finish my school work and get back on track!" Ashley cried.
"I'll even do all the chores for the next year, if I must! I'll come up with a plan!"

Ashley's family thought and thought. It took them forever, but they finally gave in.

Answer 11

Is this right?

Answer 12

There is only one problem. You should say "You're mom is right, Ashley." All you need to do is put a comma before Ashley, but the rest is good

Answer 13

oh okay... Thank you so much, your amazing.

Answer 14

Thank you

Answer 15

And no problem

Answer 16

;)

Answer 17

There right :)

Answer 18

their*

Answer 19

Lol Thnx for the medal

Answer 20

Your welcome :) Thank you again. If I need help I'll ask you first.

Answer 21

Ok I'll be waiting lol