Is anyone willing to Proofread my Personal Narrative Essay? My Teacher said that i have a BUNCH of punctuation errors. But im just not seeing it! Can someone please help? Also if you are going to make corrections will you please do them in Red so that i can see them.

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Is anyone willing to Proofread my Personal Narrative Essay?        My Teacher said that i have a BUNCH of punctuation errors.      But im just not seeing it!      Can someone please help?       Also if you are going to make corrections will you please do them in Red so that i can see them.

221emily · Answer

attachment

anonymous · Answer

where is it

anonymous · Answer

oh okay

anonymous · Answer

ill correct it in red, give me a sec

221emily · Answer

ok thank you! He said that there were Missing commas everywhere!  some missing semicolons and stuff like that and im sitting here like.. i don't see where LOL

anonymous · Answer

start with this . , re-read your story and notice a few run-on sentences

anonymous · Answer

your reasoning is good but there are a lot of irrelevant sentences in there , try to focus more on buying the dog instead of the babysitters house

221emily · Answer

@makaveli_0 OH MY GOSH thank youuuu! your like my new best friend lol I can't thank you enough! The Essay had to be a two page Essay double spaced! But because of all the extra space i put into mine i made it about 3 pages couple spaced, but in order to get the length that i have... i had to talk about the babysitters a bunch!

anonymous · Answer

lol no problem but start with that

anonymous · Answer

indent your paragraphs as well