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OpenStudy (anonymous):

PLZ HELP!!! the following paragraph and read it once through just as you would when revising your own writing. After reading, copy and paste the text into a document. Revise the paragraph for clarity in usage and mechanics. There are many examples of non-standard usage you should be able to identify. Revise the paragraph using what you’ve learned about usage and submit the rewritten paragraph

OpenStudy (anonymous):

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@Librarian plz help

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@cj49 please helpme

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@Librarian @cj49 am i only suppose to fix the erros or what?

OpenStudy (cj49):

yes u need to fix the errors

OpenStudy (anonymous):

thats it @cj49

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@cj49 or something more we have to do?

OpenStudy (cj49):

u have to rewrite the whole thing

OpenStudy (cj49):

nopes u just have to fix the errors and then u have to rewrite the whole thing

OpenStudy (anonymous):

like so the first sentence wont be the same ? @cj49 wen i rewrite

OpenStudy (cj49):

assume that u have written this whole thing and u are just revising it and just fixing the errors

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@cj49 huh??

OpenStudy (cj49):

copy the paragraph as it is and then fix the errors in it

OpenStudy (anonymous):

errors principles @cj49

OpenStudy (anonymous):

kindergarten students

OpenStudy (anonymous):

No way!

OpenStudy (cj49):

??

OpenStudy (anonymous):

the mistakes I'm fixing them @cj49

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@cj49 i didnt type the whole paragraph just the correcting the mistakes

OpenStudy (cj49):

but ull need to subit the revised paragraph

OpenStudy (anonymous):

i know @cj49

OpenStudy (anonymous):

but i need to know the mistakes first @cj49

OpenStudy (cj49):

k

OpenStudy (anonymous):

and fix them and then rewrite the paragraph @cj49

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@cj49 can u help?

OpenStudy (librarian):

Hi @babyblue123 you rang?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@Librarian yes

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@Librarian can u help?

OpenStudy (librarian):

Possibly

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@cj49 how did u find this?

OpenStudy (cj49):

google :P

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@cj49 i never found it on google

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@cj49 like what site is it????

OpenStudy (cj49):

just type the first line of the paragraph there

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@cj49 what did u search on google to find this?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@cj49 wowww

OpenStudy (cj49):

xDD

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@cj49 thanks dude

OpenStudy (cj49):

yw

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