Question

Can someone please check to make sure that i did not miss anything while proofreading my Essay.

PLEASEEEEE!!!!

I will attach the Original and the Broken down Paragraph by Paragraph revision, and the Final Essay.

Feel free to make corrections of your own on the Final Essay in red so that i can see them.

Answer 1

@makaveli_0 @mathgeek27 @MarkIsABeast

Answer 2

@tinybookworm

Answer 3

-face palm- why is it always essays ;-;

Answer 4

Like yo.... I gave you proof that i tried to correct it my self... Its not like im cheating here i need an A i have to do another Essay after this one I NEED TO GET IT DONEEE!!!

Answer 5

never said that just mean isn't there anything easier?

Answer 6

uahh you could ask my teacher.. because its not like i give my self the homework...

Answer 7

so....... sarcasm we meet again -_- ~face palm~

Answer 8

You do know i blocked you for a reason right? And your not helping with my question. If you could be so kind as to help me or find someone to help me that would be much appreciated if you don't plan on doing either of those i will simply ignore you.

Answer 9

Do you still need it to be proofread?

Answer 10

@naxve yes

Answer 11

Ok, give me a minute. :)

Answer 12

Here is the revised version. Let me know if you have any questions.

Answer 13

@naxve thank you!!

Answer 14

No problem. :)