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OpenStudy (kate1624):

The big day had finally arrived, after all those long months of wedding plans it was finally time for me to share my dad with Ellen. How could one fix this run on sentence?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

The big day had finally arrived! After all those long months of wedding plans, it was finally time for me to share my dad with Ellen.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

You could change the exclamation mark if you want. did this help?

OpenStudy (kate1624):

It did thank you very much! :)

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