Question

I need someone to just look over this and see if I need to fix or add anything to it?

Answer 1

Gardening is done by people of all ages all over the world! Being able to just go outside and plant vegetables, fruits, or maybe beautiful blooming daisies for your grandmother is relaxing. Gardening really does offer more than just children enjoying themselves. Just by going outside moving around getting a little dirty keeps our bodies going, while others are talking about video games, you could be bragging about how you have helped out a family member by planting their fruits and veggies. Of course, not all kids are going to be amazed at you planting something for your grandma. But, no matter what, you will have the satisfying feeling of helping out your grandparents. Gardening not only smells delightful and tastes outstanding, but it is also a very beautiful and colorful sight to have in your front and backyard. It can be interesting sometimes, people can make art out of their flowers and bushes. Learning how to garden is not hard and it is definitely something to be proud of.

Answer 2

@lopezking1

Answer 3

@Chop-GTA5

Answer 4

Instead of using veggies use vegetables and when you said "of course not all kids are going to be amazed at you planting something for your grandma." Make the following but a lowercase make the period into a comma and say "Of course, not all kids are going to be amazed at the fact you garden for your grandmother, but no matter what, you will always have the satisfying feeling of knowing you could help out your grandparents."

Answer 5

Thank you :)