Question

5. What is the best way to revise sentence 6?
She claimed to have taught 15,000 women about how to shoot guns and how to defend themselves.
She claimed to have taught 15,000 women about shooting guns and to defend themselves.
She claimed to have taught 15,000 women about how to shoot guns and also she taught about defending themselves.
She claimed to have taught 15,000 women about how to shooting guns and defend themselves.
@Destinymasha

Answer 1

The first one because the parallel structure is the correct one

Answer 2

I agree with Ste (:

Answer 3

:) its stef @Destinymasha

Answer 4

What is the best way to revise sentence 5?
They had already practiced parallel parking, to back up, and to merge into traffic.
They had already practiced how to parallel park, backing up, and merge into traffic.
They had already practiced to parallel parking, back up, and merging into traffic.
They had already practiced parallel parking, backing up, and merging into traffic.

Answer 5

@stefrheart :)

Answer 6

2nd one?

Answer 7

last one for parallel structure

Answer 8

The runway model in the floor-length gown strutted down the catwalk, struck a pose at the end, and, with a wink for the photographers, (pivoted on her heel to walk back.)

What is the best way to write the underlined part of the sentence? I put it in parentheses.

she also pivoted on her heel to walk back
pivoting on her heel to walk back
Leave as is
to pivot on her heel to walk back

Answer 9

oh there its either leave as is or the first one