Question

hello
this's my own paragraph
i need to check it
grammar, punctuation...etc

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lldJzIbb4PserY15H9K5Mbtvs8p1skymzQHa_Y2hm_0/edit

Answer 1

google drive is blocked for my college laptop :/

Answer 2

@bibby can you help ?

Answer 3

@morganchavez

Answer 4

it wont let me see it u need to copy n paste it on here please

Answer 5

Because I started up my project only two months ago, and I am in the preliminary design stage yet.
I was not able to register in the competitions in this year 2014
But I am considering some competitions, such as MIE, startup injaz-Egypt, and social innovation for employment competition which organized by Nahdet El Mahrousa. I will apply for them in the next year (2015) ISA
As much as possible, I will Compete in these competitions to publishing my project and myself, and win the competitions
I am so sorry for stretching, and thanks for consideration my applications
Actually my project can be operates within three sectors transportation, environment, and clean energy



@GirlgoyleH.

Answer 6

Because I started up my project only two months ago, I'm currently in the preliminary design stage. I wasn't able to register in the competitions this year, but I am considering some competitions, such as MIE, startup injaz-Egypt, and social innovation for employment competition which organized by Nahdet El Mahrousa. I will apply for them next year, (ISA). I will compete in these competitions as much as I can. I am so sorry for stretching, and thanks for the consideration of my application. My project can be operated within three sectors transportation, environment, and clean energy

Answer 7

thank you a lot :)