Question

what is life
but a never ending pit
it just brings strife...
its all for nothing
a big empty spot
on the poem of eternity
a big dot
on the perfect skin of the people

Answer 1

another poem

im stuck in this black hole of my mind
noone around noone to remind
i feel like i am 6 feet under ground
when i never got to feel around
i never got to know love
i never got to be above
yes there is a hole in my soul
and let me tell you it is taking its toll
and now all i know is hate and pain
never seen the sun, only the rain

Answer 2

yet another poem...

for this little princess
time is running out
and i am falling down
no matter how much i scream and shout
my reign will end and be destroyed
all for the simple fact my heart is void
of emotion and of strenth
to take on the world or anything at length
i just stand there and stare
letting other people down
i let people down everywhere
not just my mom or dad
ill neverfind the love that i once had!

Answer 3

This is really good @demonickittenlover

Answer 4

haha which one??? lol

Answer 5

all of them lol

Answer 6

You are amazing

Answer 7

Amazing I love reading your posts @demonickittenlover

Answer 8

these are so beautiful. I love the emotion you put behind your poems.

Answer 9

thanks guys it means alot i mean its hard to put them out there cause im afraid people will hate

Answer 10

Who cares words can't harm you, unless you let them get to you @demonickittenlover right @Destinycholie

Answer 11

i guess

Answer 12

These are very well writing

Answer 13

thanks chu

Answer 14

i love your poems!! :D

Answer 15

thank chu

Answer 16

no problem.