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para el de cuatro de julio vamos al parque o alg n lugar especial para nosotros .normalmente traemos a todos los que podemos amigos, familia como toda la familia . Entonces tenemos un picnic y vamos a nadar ya sabes slo para pasar un buen da en familia . Luego nos vamos a comer para la cena en familia. nos vamos a casa despus de eso y esperamos Hasta Que se Haga oscuro . a continuacin, las obras de fuego salen tronamos los mas callados primero y despues los que se escuchan grandes . ( me olvid de lo que se llamavan . entonces los ninos chiqutitos van a la cama y los adultos encluiendo me yo mi

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plz help me correct this

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@anonymous_user

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thnx so much

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n1 capitalization; spelling Sn2 capitalization; inverted structure; sentence structure; Sn3 punctuation; spelling(2); Sn5 capitalization(3); spelling; Sn6 capitalization; insert accent mark; incorrect vocabulary-literal translation; Sn7 to Remainder of essay; incorrect sentence structure; punctuation; spelling; incoherent

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i suck at spanish i barely understood this

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You need it translated or the punctuation to be corrected?

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n1 capitalization; spelling Sn2 capitalization; inverted structure; sentence structure; Sn3 punctuation; spelling(2); Sn5 capitalization(3); spelling; Sn6 capitalization; insert accent mark; incorrect vocabulary-literal translation; Sn7 to Remainder of essay; incorrect sentence structure; punctuation; spelling; incoherent this is what my teacher said i dont need it translated i have to correct it but dont really no how

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The first senetence needs the first word to be capitalized

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thank you

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Welcome do you have to do every sentence?

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i have to fix all puncuation spelling erros all that through my hole paragraph
n1 capitalization; spelling Sn2 capitalization; inverted structure; sentence structure; Sn3 punctuation; spelling(2); Sn5 capitalization(3); spelling; Sn6 capitalization; insert accent mark; incorrect vocabulary-literal translation; Sn7 to Remainder of essay; incorrect sentence structure; punctuation; spelling; incoherent this is what my teacher said

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but i sont get how to do this i suck at spanish

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Its okay!

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thnx so much

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you are a life saver

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what is slo
lol your welcome and thank you

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yw i wold ask my gf if she was on lol she help me trnslate this from english to spanish

http://openstudy.com/study#/updates/542ee002e4b032bb1c821cf6

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so is it wrong or what lol

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para el de cuatro de julio vamos al parque o algún lugar especial para nosotros .normalmente traemos a todos los que podemos amigos / familia como toda la familia . Entonces tenemos un picnic y vamos a nadar ya sabes sólo para pasar un buen día en familia . Luego nos vamos a comer para la cena en familia. nos vamos a casa después de eso y esperamos Hasta Que se Haga oscuro . a continuación, las obras de fuego salen tronamos los mas callados primero y despues los que se escuchan grandes . ( me olvidé de lo que se llamavan . entonces los ninos chiqutitos van a la cama y los adultos encluiendo me yo miso nos quedamos dispiertos y nos divertimos hasta que noas mueramos de sueño y o nos desmayamos ( nosotros no morimos realmente ) . pero eso es cómo va normalmente.

This is what your gf put and did you do like word for word?

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i wanna say we did

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okay so i think your slo is solo with an accent on the last o

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or 4th of july we go done to the park or some where special to us.we usaly bring evrybody we can frinds/ family like all the family. Then we have a pcinic and we go swming you know just to have a good ol family day. Then we go out to eat for dinner as a family. we go home after that and wait untill it gets dark. then the fire works come out we pop lil wild cats to screamers to big banger type ones.( i forgot what there called. then the little kidsgo to bed and the grown-ups encluding me stay up and have fun till we die or pass out(we dont really die). but thats how it usaly goes. the english version

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brb

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En el cuatro de julio, nosotros vamos a la parque o en algn (u w/ accent).

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^ is that the first sentence pr part of it lol

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@stefrheart are you there ????

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That is the first sentence

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ok thnx

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Welcome

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Normalmente, trajimos todo las personas nosotros pudemos ... i dont understand your sentence

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Then we have a pcinic and we go swming you know just to have a good ol family day

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OH you changed your second sentence?

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yes loltomake it bttr

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oh okay so it would be Entonces tenemos un picnic(i think thats the word i cant remember) y vamos nadando, tu sabes solo(accent on last o) tener a bueno dia con la familia.

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u are really good at this

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Then we go out to eat for dinner as a family.

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Thanks 4 years of spanish

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im sorry if it seems like im rushing you but i have pratice soon lol

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@morganchavez

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YES

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help me lol n1 capitalization; spelling Sn2 capitalization; inverted structure; sentence structure; Sn3 punctuation; spelling(2); Sn5 capitalization(3); spelling; Sn6 capitalization; insert accent mark; incorrect vocabulary-literal translation; Sn7 to Remainder of essay; incorrect sentence structure; punctuation; spelling; incoherent this is what my teacher said

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ara el de cuatro de julio vamos al parque o alg n lugar especial para nosotros .normalmente traemos a todos los que podemos amigos, familia como toda la familia . Entonces tenemos un picnic y vamos a nadar ya sabes slo para pasar un buen da en familia . Luego nos vamos a comer para la cena en familia. nos vamos a casa despus de eso y esperamos Hasta Que se Haga oscuro . a continuacin, las obras de fuego salen tronamos los mas callados primero y despues los que se escuchan grandes . ( me olvid de lo que se llamavan . entonces los ninos chiqutitos van a la cama y los adultos encluiendo me yo mi

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REALLYY!!!

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this guydid the first two sentences and disapperad on me

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really bae my teachers are agghh

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DUDE I NEVER TYPED THT UP FOR U THT I CANT EVEN READ

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you did to typed that on friday

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http://openstudy.com/study#/updates/542ee002e4b032bb1c821cf6

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HANG ON ILL FIGURE THIS OUT BC U COMPLETLY COPPIED N PASTED WRONG

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i did not im no newby tp copy and paste

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on 4th of july we go done to the park or some where special to us. Then we have a pcinic and we go swming you know just to have a good ol family day. Then we go out to eat for dinner as a family. we go home after that and wait untill it gets dark. then the fire works come out we pop lil wild cats to screamers to big banger type ones.( i forgot what there called. then the little kidsgo to bed and the grown-ups encluding me stay up and have fun till we die or pass out(we dont really die). but thats how it usaly goes.

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i need thisin spanish i have the first two sentences done al ready

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sorry bout that my mom need some dressing up advice

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wait

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how did ur teacher say all tht it is write ! omg ur teacher cra cra bc wow what spanish u takin

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she just told me what was wrong wich was this>>>>>>sn1 capitalization; spelling Sn2 capitalization; inverted structure; sentence structure; Sn3 punctuation; spelling(2); Sn5 capitalization(3); spelling; Sn6 capitalization; insert accent mark; incorrect vocabulary-literal translation; Sn7 to Remainder of essay; incorrect sentence structure; punctuation; spelling; incoherent this is what my teacher said

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:(

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ik lol im sorry but its what it is

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seriously dude im doing skool work i spoke with a princeple n u tellin me ur teacher tellin me she want accent marks do she not know computers aint spanish

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lol

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like i said i did the first and third sentence with this guy on here i delted the seond sntence so there not much left to do

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fine ill do it !

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i hate being ,mixed

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thank you so much bae!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 ily and i love you in that pic

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ily so much

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@morganchavez

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thx! n np hmmmmmmm ok but this is the last spanish thing right !?!? bc i got a lot of work

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oh btw you are my screen saver on my phone

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yes bae the last one

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ok

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bae do u like this pic or should i change it

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im soooo pissed ! i typed n i was bout to send it n it earase wtf

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i lik

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ok thnx n os i sstupid like that it did that to me three times

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or this pic

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this one lol

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taz

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ok lmfao this is when i refused to cut my hair lmfaoshid yes bae

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my os messing up it wont lte me

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it keep erasin

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pm it to me plz
that might work

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mk

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you are the best bae

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hmmm yea

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ok sorry my dad needed some stuff

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is it letting you pm it to me

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Para el cuatro de Julio vamos al parque o algun lugar que es especial para toda mi familia y amigos. Nosotros vamos para el parque y asemos un picnic y despues nadamos. Luego nos vamos a comer la cena en familia en casa. Cuando acabamos de comer hablos con todos asta que se ponga oscuro. A continuacion, tronamos Las Obras De Fuego. Primero los mas chiquitos despues los que se escuchan mas grandes. (se me olvido como se llamavan) Los ninos se van a la cama y los adultos encluiendo me yo mismo nos cuedamos atentos. Asta que tengamos sueno y despertamos asta el siguente dia.

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ñ ontop of nino third letter and tht shuld be all

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omg if you was here i would so hug the guts out of you i love you and miss you

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mmmhmmm lol ily too i gtg do spanish and more math n god only knows what else

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ok liy you are my heart seya later honey

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ok bye

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bye bye

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@morganchavez it partly my fualt cuz i really didnt keep it quiet lol so dont be mad be glad of the question i want to ask you now plz jump on tc