Question

Songs and raps of mine tell me what you think.

Answer 1

Instead of: (Verse 1):
It seems like my life is one big elevator ups and down even though im grown and should act mature im immature.

Should have paid attention to my father free wisdom then I wouldn’t be where I was before, I was just a fool trying to act cool when I was scared on the inside all along.

But then perfect love came to me and said come back to me that when I got up from my slump got outta my dumps and changed.

(Chorus x2):
The Lord knows I need him like air instead of rejecting me he saved me instead of sending me to hell he gave me a second chance on life he loved me when I hated him instead of turning a deaf ear he heard my cries all alone.

(Verse 2):

Lord I know you spoke to me and woke the sleeper inside of me you got me in your hands your not dropping me.

You used my father as a witness to me I finally witnessed a change you caused on the inside of me, even though I was a misfit you cared for me.

You adopted me into your heavenly family put my name into the book of life, put my anger to sleep and stopped me before I killed myself.

(Chorus x2):
The Lord knows I need him like air instead of rejecting me he saved me instead of sending me to hell he gave me a second chance on life he loved me when I hated him instead of turning a deaf ear he heard my cries all alone.

Answer 2

Boom goes my heart: (Song):
I love the way you smile, I love the way you care for me you been there for me when I was down.

Every time I see your face I smile every time I hear your voice I don’t disserve you but you don’t care you love me for who I am.

You keep me human when I feel inhuman you’re a beauty im a beast, you tamed the savage side in me, girl I love you cross my heart I want to please you.

(Chorus x2):

Every time I see boom goes my heart it blows up like a bomb im in love with you I wish you be mine I can’t hide my emotions for you any more.

(Song):
I appreciate you being my friend helping me out, I just had to make a song for you.

I want to be a better man for you I don’t love you for your body I love you because of who you are.

Your beautiful inside and outside to me your loyal, nice, caring, kind and lovely you lit the match to my fire.

(Chorus x2):

Every time I see boom goes my heart it blows up like a bomb im in love with you I wish you be mine I can’t hide my emotions for you any more.

Answer 3

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Answer 4

Running home: (Chorus X2):
Father I’ve been beaten, hurt and broken apart and torn up inside and out I’ve made many mistakes but you’ll still forgive me so im running back to you father.

(Verse 1):
I got a lot of scars shortcomings so many up and downs how can I say I serve you when I ain’t doing what’s right but thanks to you I am getting better.

No matter how many times I have sinned against you, you still will forgive me and open your arms to me.

If it weren’t for you I would not be where I am at now thank you father THANK you father.

(Chorus X2):
Father I’ve been beaten, hurt and broken apart and torn up inside and out I’ve made many mistakes but you’ll still forgive me so im running back to you father.

(Verse 2):
It still amazes me how you take my mistakes and make them right clean my soul whiter than snow.

You saved my soul from hell, you saved my life from the grave father, you saved me.

I know that no matter how much I sin your grace is so much more that it replaces it thank you for your grace father, thank you for your kindness and understanding, thank you that you did not give up on me when others did, THANK YOU FATHER!!!

(Chorus X2):
Father I’ve been beaten, hurt and broken apart and torn up inside and out I’ve made many mistakes but you’ll still forgive me so im running back to you father.

Answer 5

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Answer 6

Calling all: (Chorus x2):
Calling all the broken hearted calling all the lost, calling all the sick, calling all the lovely losers, calling all God arms are open he’s knocking on your door open your heart to him and you’ll never be the same.

(Verse):
I thought I was worthless to until I heard about Christ he forgiven me all I want is for you to see God for who he really is.

Its all right you don’t have to fight him you don’t have to push him away I know I cant sway you to follow him but what I can tell you is, that he cares for you its only fair to give him a chance.

He is a gentleman he wont force himself onto you he’s a gentle giant but we have been defiant but he still opening his arms to you.

(Chorus x2):
Calling all the broken hearted calling all the lost, calling all the sick, calling all the lovely losers, calling all God arms are open he’s knocking on your door open your heart to him and you’ll never be the same.

Answer 7

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Answer 8

DAYUUUM! Bruh!! Still at it? x'D Glad you havn't given up! Follow your dream.. Very Nice :3

Answer 9

Oh i forgot to post another rap and song hold on and thx

Answer 10

I got a fire: (Song):

Im not going to stop until the whole world knows who he is I just want to jump shout and praise your name.

I want to lift your name on high and let everyone know the loving father serve the God of all the one who gives life and takes it away.

Im letting everyone one know that your love never stops, that your loyal all the days of our life.

You died for us and was raised on the third day no I ain’t gonna stop telling everyone about you.

YOU RESCUED US YOU SAVED US YOU ARE A GOOD GOD, YOU ARE A FAITHFUL GOD, YOU ARE A LOVING GOD AND YOU ARE ALWAYS LOYAL.

(Chorus x2):

I got a fire in my heart for you burning you and it ain’t going out at all I got a fire no water can stop, I got a fire no fireman can put out a fire for you burning bright.

Answer 11

This is good stuff mang.... Good job keep working out it... Like fr you need to get signed mang..... Create some demos and post em to sound cloud so we can hear :)

Answer 12

Glory goes to God

Answer 13

Was it worth it: (Verse 1):
On my mind I thought of you were my sister even though all you brought to the family was sadness.

All I hear about you now isn’t so good I didn’t ask you to leave out the house and marry a unsaved man but you just couldn’t stand us could you.

I can’t ask how my sister doing cause I know its something wrong I can’t ask to I hope that every time you look in the mirror you say its all worth it I can’t ask to speak to you for wisdom in hard times cause that will mean ill always be writing one of these rhymes.

(Chorus x2):
All the times iv cried about you, all the times I prayed for you, all the lies you told I hope you can say all you’ve done was worth it.

(Song):

I just want you to know I love you and forgive you your still my blood my family.

So come on home we’ll forgive you they forgave me even though I didn’t disserve it.

Come on back to the Lord stop sinning come on home I miss you.

(Chorus x2):
All the times iv cried about you, all the times I prayed for you, all the lies you told I hope you can say all you’ve done was worth it.

Answer 14

Man your good! xD keep up the good work

Answer 15

Glory goes to God

Answer 16

:)

Answer 17

Awesome dude!