Question

here is a poem

I may not be perfect
but when it comes to you
I try to give you every thing you ask for
sorry I can't
our life since it began
our love was lost
forever in a day time
once loved
now hated
by you both ways

Answer 1

I really like that hun!

Answer 2

That's an excellent poem!

Answer 3

Excellent!!! :D

Answer 4

I know I like to write so I just make them up

Answer 5

@Destinycholie @Clalgee

Answer 6

Wow! Great work on this poem! It's short, sweet, and has a great message at the ending. I love how you said. "Our love was lost, forever in a day time.." This message really catches the essence of the entire poem. Great job!