Revise the following sentence that I wrote and see if I need to add or subtract things:

First Knight Movie:

One theme that was visible in the movie was clinging to superior morals and paragons are not always the easiest thing to do, but it is the right thing to do. King Arthur was looking out for what was better for Camelot than himself. His wife was trying to do what was better for her husband than herself. Lancelot was trying to be a cavalier and do what was best for the queen even though he had an endearment for her.

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Revise the following sentence that I wrote and see if I need to add or subtract things:

First Knight Movie:

One theme that was visible in the movie was clinging to superior morals and paragons are not always the easiest thing to do, but it is the right thing to do. King Arthur was looking out for what was better for Camelot than himself. His wife was trying to do what was better for her husband than herself. Lancelot was trying to be a cavalier and do what was best for the queen even though he had an endearment for her.

firejay5 · Answer

@Destinymasha

anonymous · Answer

One theme that was visible in the movie was that clinging to superior morals and paragons are not always the easiest thing to do, but it is the right thing to do. For example, King Arthur was looking out for what was better for Camelot, rather than himself.

anonymous · Answer

Likewise, his wife was trying to do what was better for her husband than herself. Furthermore, Lancelot was trying to be a cavalier and do what was best for the queen, even though he had an endearment for her.

anonymous · Answer

Not sure why Lancelot wants to be a cavalier though.

firejay5 · Answer

@ManImStumped cavalier means gentleman