would this work for a song?

so long goodbye, are such meaningless words, see you later is better that what has been said.
I love you such powerful meaning, but what is it worth if you've never heard those words yourself? I can't believe it but I think I can, but will never say it to you now, knowing that if we start we'll never be the same.
so i'll just talk and laugh along with you even though you'll never know and that's okay, because this pain is worth the other if it ends badly. i'll just close my eyes and escape to my dreams of you wishing to hear those words myself.

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would this work for a song?

so long goodbye, are such meaningless words, see you later is better that what has been said.
I love you such powerful meaning, but what is it worth if you've never heard those words yourself? I can't believe it but I think I can, but will never say it to you now, knowing that if we start we'll never be the same. 
so i'll just talk and laugh along with you even though you'll never know and that's okay, because this pain is worth the other if it ends badly. i'll just close my eyes and escape to my dreams of you wishing to hear those words myself.

anonymous · Answer

I like it. It would make a fabulous song :)

anonymous · Answer

Nice

anonymous · Answer

cool

anonymous · Answer

I could do the instrumentals, just give me the notes and ill se what i can do, it will be piano tho