Question

your right
love isn't real but
when it comes to life
you have to face the hard times
and find your love partner
and whn you do be sure to hold them tight
and never ever let them go
because once you do it
you will never get them back
and it is hard to fine another person to love again
when people love each other it is cute
when they don't it ends in death of one in the other one in prison
Then the world will start to fade away
due to all of this killing between the married couples

Answer 1

*you're. in the first line

Answer 2

thanks for correcting me

Answer 3

@Clalgee

Answer 4

Wow! You ended this poem very dramatically, "Due to all of this killing between the married couples". One very minor thing is the grammar spelling such as:

- when (6th line)
- find (10th line)

Other than that, I love how your started and as well as ended your poem. It gives a feeling to the reader wanting them to read more. Keep up the great work!!

Answer 5

I will