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OpenStudy (love_to_love_you):

Please help. Will fan and medal! Revise the sentences below to improve fluency. Specifically, add variety to the sentence types, and use transitional words so that sentences flow smoothly. Summer is my favorite season. I enjoy the warm weather. School ends. I like to go swimming, have picnics, and relax. I hope you like the summer, too.

OpenStudy (kohai):

You just need to use words to make it flow. For example, Summer is my favorite season BECAUSE I enjoy warm weather and school ends.

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