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OpenStudy (nathalyn):

Please correct any sentence fragments and run-on sentences in the following paragraphs. Last summer we didn’t have a very fun vacation because my mom got sick my dad did too. Awful. No one felt good. Except me. Then I was bored. Because there wasn’t anyone to do anything with. We had planned to go to the beach to collect shells. Shells everywhere. But, I didn’t get to take any home because I was too young to go by myself and everyone else was sick so I went home empty handed and that made me very sad.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Awful. No one felt good. Except me.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

for fragment

OpenStudy (nathalyn):

I didn't write this paragraph there telling me to fix the pharagraph

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