Question

A Path Was Crossed
By: Makayla Tracy
The day before Halloween and no one knew what was going on. Out of the corner of our eyes we see this dark shadowy figure and it starts to make a really loud noise which it almost sound like a heart beat mixed with a dying animal. It send chills up our spinal cords and knowing what we know about this creature he is the one who tried to kill the light of the moon, and during the day it tried to distinguish the light of the sun. On image never goes away it is always in your mind, never look into his Dark red eyes, fish like skin.

Answer 1

the rest of the story

it almost feels like it is sending poisons in to your body which if it reaches your face you will die instantly. Not because you seen him but because you touched his fish like skin. Once that happens you will be already start to die with out even knowing. Then awaits the portal of death inside a girl named Jennifer who has no power once so ever due to the loss of her king and the witch named Kaitlyn and with her scary powers she causes distances in the in the world to expand and stretch till not more can be change in our history. Once this is change it can't be rewritten. Kaitlyn's super powers include that telepathic vision and night vision and Jennifer as her self faces her head on through the portal of death as it begins to open the evil will be unleashed into the world. I know like who cares but the question is who is scared to die. Once you die you will return into another person or insect when you return to the earth when you are gone. So life as we know it will be changed for ever not that is isn't already changing but you get the point. Unleashing the powers of dark the world begins to spin at a fast but steady pace. Now they have returned. In walks in a scary but sweet looking child they call her Emily her powers have change the world once before. This includes the change in the grass and how she made the bugs look like a scary large insect like in those Hollywood movies. You know and all. The walks in the witch of the west and her name is Leigh. She will try to turn you into a pot of boiling gravy to feed to her cats.

Answer 2

@Destinycholie @Clalgee

Answer 3

I would have to say that is a very interesting story. I think what makes it the most unique is the storyline. I mostly loved how you were very detailed such as the following below:

- If it reaches your face you will die instantly
- She will try to turn you into a pot of boiling gravy to feed to her cats
- Which it almost sound like a heart beat mixed with a dying animal

Although there are minor spelling errors, that situation can be easily resolved. You have wonderful details and a wonderful storyline. I thought that this story was very exotic and unique. I really like that! Keep up the great work!

Answer 4

thank u it was for my English class for Halloween

Answer 5

Your welcome. :)