Question

Is this a good thesis statement and opening? "The story of Romeo and juliet is an emotional tragedy written by William Shakespeare, about two teenagers in love in who refuse to live without each other and end up ending each of their own lives because the other has “died”. It all starts of course with the feuding families of ancient verona, and there children Romeo and Juliet. Throughout the play, the relationships between the parents on Romeo’s side and Juliet’s side vary greatly. "

Answer 1

if not how do i improve it

Answer 2

That is really good! Good Job!

Answer 3

Thank you! @Chop-GTA5

Answer 4

Your very welcome!

Answer 5

Can you see any grammar mistakes? @Chop-GTA5

Answer 6

let me check

Answer 7

capitalize the v in Verona

Answer 8

and thats all i can see

Answer 9

okay! Thank you

Answer 10

your welcome