Question

The conch creates a bond between Piggy and Ralph aiding them in locating the additional temporary inhabitants of the island.

Answer 1

Is this grammatically correct now?

Answer 2

Who are the additional temporary inhabitants?

Answer 3

the other children.

Answer 4

Sounds good.

Answer 5

Much better tahn the last tbh

Answer 6

REALLY?!

Answer 7

I did this
Incorrect Sentence:
Piggy and Ralph both find a conch which bring them together as a team to try and find the other temporary inhabitants of the island.

Corrected Sentence:
The conch creates a bond between Piggy and Ralph, aiding them in locating the additional temporary inhabitants of the island.

Answer 8

Yes. Much better!

Answer 9

No grammar mistakes at all?
How about commas..

Answer 10

Commas are good.

Answer 11

or should I take out the comma before aiding

Answer 12

Keep the comma.

Answer 13

Incorrect Sentence:
In a society where there is no set political system, a chief is the closest thing that will help keep everyone organized under one development.
Corrected Sentence:
A chief is the closest form of organization available in order to contain everyone under one government in weak civilizations.

Answer 14

I just got out the shower. So gimme a minute.

Answer 15

Incorrect Sentences:
The conch gives Ralph the position of power and the voice of veto. The conch is a side privilege to being the chief, it emphasizes the fact that the ruler has power and is in the position to speak over all.

Corrected Sentences:
The conch is a privilege which accentuates Ralph’s power and emphasizes his ability to overrule others.

Answer 16

Take your time

Answer 17

Sounds good so far.

Answer 18

both?

Answer 19

Am I still saying the same things? I don't want to cut out portions, I basically summarized it into smaller sentences.

Answer 20

You there..?:)

Answer 21

So far so good.

Answer 22

I'm not taking any pieces of info out on the corrected right?
Everything still means the same?

Answer 23

Yes. It's all good.

Answer 24

:)

Answer 25

That's about it I believe.

Answer 26

Thank you for helping!

Answer 27

You're welcome! Take care.

Answer 28

You too!:)xxxxx