Question

and if i cant receive it i will be gone
if this doesn't change i am leaving this state
far away from you baby
baby i will be always beside you
i will face everything that you face in life
i am giving you one last chance
why r u leaving my sid e i thought we were forever i guess i was wrong you gave me heart break
you see what you have done to me
i thought that it was over. Why r still here?
Are you waiting on someone or something to come around for you to try to save me
our love is gone

Answer 1

Okay this goes with the sound of amazing Grace
how r u still here
i came to you for your love
and if i cant receive it i will be gone
if this doesn't change i am leaving this state
far away from you baby
baby i will be always beside you
i will face everything that you face in life
i am giving you one last chance
why r u leaving my sid e i thought we were forever i guess i was wrong you gave me heart break
you see what you have done to me
i thought that it was over. Why r still here?
Are you waiting on someone or something to come around for you to try to save me
our love is gone

Answer 2

wow!

Answer 3

I know right I love to write

Answer 4

i see...its wonderful!

Answer 5

thanks you are a very pretty girl

Answer 6

@Destinycholie forgot to insert your name

Answer 7

hehee

Answer 8

found you hahahaha

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Answer 9

This is really amazing @MakaylaTracy

Answer 10

thank you I try my best

Answer 11

Aww thank you :)

Answer 12

@Clalgee

Answer 13

Great poem! I could really visualize the story in my head. You are a truly wonderful writer and I'm excited to read your next poems. This poem sounded more like a story or song rather than a poem (which is not a bad thing). Although, I liked the theme of your poem :) Great work!