Thesis: Atticus is a perfect fatherly figure because he sets a perfect example of behaviour and honesty to Scout and Jem. Together, Atticus’s words, actions and thoughts molded him into an aspiring parent.
Is this a good thesis statement?

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Thesis: Atticus is a perfect fatherly figure because he sets a perfect example of behaviour and honesty to Scout and Jem. Together, Atticus’s words, actions and thoughts molded him into an aspiring parent.
Is this a good thesis statement?

anonymous · Answer

Use another word for perfect since it is repeated twice. "Molded" needs to be molds. Other than that it's fine

anonymous · Answer

Sorry, mold not molds.