Is there too much going on in my story? The major conflict is this kid trying to decide whether he wants to go to a party or do his paper that's due the next day. So that's the internal conflict. But I was also thinking of having his friend trying to talk him into the party. I figure it's fine because she'd just be an influence for his decision. But I don't know, is having and internal AND external conflict, in one scene, too much?

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anonymous · Answer

damn well this is history :( i wouldnt know

anonymous · Answer

Yeah ik I did that on accident lol sorry it was my first question on here

anonymous · Answer

lol its okay sorry we couldnt help

anonymous · Answer

No, I think it's fine. In that kind of situation, that's totally normal.