Question

Can someone proofread this paragraph? WILL MEDAL!

Answer 1

This is written as if I am Galileo Galilei:

In order to spread my scientific ideas and theories, I would write a book. However, I would give the book to my favorite child, Virginia Galilei, to keep it hidden and a secret until my death. After my death, Virginia would secretly publish the book. Becuase this will all happen after I am dead, I will not be excommunicated, imprisoned, or dead. When the people read my book, they will understand that my theories are correct and realize that Copernicus's theories are also correct.

Answer 2

@Squirrels
@adrynicoleb
@sammixboo

Answer 3

I think it is great!

I am sure there isn't any typos I am not really focused right now and a bit tired < _ > Dealing with some stufr right now, BUT anyways. What are you writing??

Answer 4

I sure do have some typos though x_x

Answer 5

I just have to write a paragraph answering the question:

Imagine you are Galileo. You have discovered much scientific evidence that proves many of the believes held by the church as incorrect. How would you respond to the inquisition, knowing that public disagreement with the church could mean excommunication, imprisonment, or death.

I'm just worried that it isn't formatted like a normal paragraph with topic sentences and commentary, but I think it's ok.

Answer 6

OoOOohhh

Answer 7

Yup.

Answer 8

@sammixboo
Thanks so much!