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Hi everyone,
I almost finish my newspaper article but I need some more detail. If you could help me then I will be very thankful to you.

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10

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9

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8

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7

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6

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5

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4

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3

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2

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1

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what is that?

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i dont know
but now ur question
will not close

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fart

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what's up dude i am just kidding

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Get lost my a

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@MTALHAHASSSAN2 THAT WAS MEAN YA JERK

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ps.FAAARRRTT FART FART FART AND HMMM I DON,T KNOW FART

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lol thanks

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no prob lol

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people like this deserve farts

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did some one answer your question if not i will

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well i,ll be in your question

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Please help me!!

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Um, yeah no.

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One. You told someone to get lost in a rude way. Two. I don't know da question. 3. I'm only 12 so yeah. xx

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Yeah I do

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Because like he is disturbing me

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That the reason

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A helicopter flew in and saved the boy from drowning... There store done

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Or flew over the water tower... Like if it had no top

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But what be the main idea

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Who he go to the water tower?

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In sleeping?

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PLease Help me

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Give me some ideas!@#

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IT,S YOUR ARTICLE

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what you mean>

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Please help me?

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he was standing up for himself, he actually was nice about it. If I were him I would've told him the same....probably worse

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@MTALHAHASSAN2 give me one sec

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ok

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So what do you need again?

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like I need some information about that what do I have to write in my newspaper article.

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Like why he go to water tower

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is this an actual event? ( Sleepwalking Boy Rescued from Water Tower)

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no

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Its not an actual event but I have to write a newspaper article on this

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Well first I would read a little about sleepwalking. And provide reasonable and believable reasons for why this had happened (back door was unlocked,boy had a habit of sleepwalking long distances)

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ok

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So basically which I wrote is like this:
Yesterday, Hamza a 16 years old boy and student of grade 10th rescued from water tower because he was tried to kill himself in Misissauga,Ontario.

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Is it a good lead sentence for a newspaper article?

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hey

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Yes, but make it a bit more interesting. Try throwing some adjectives in that sentence :)

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So basically my newspaper aticle lead sentence is this"
Yesterday, Hamza a 16 years old boy and a student in 10th grade was rescued from a water tower because, he tried to kill himself in Misissauga,Ontario.

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ok

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so Example / While this boy was being rescued bye the firefighters he Blanked then you add what you think goes well

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what you mean?

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make it interesting in your own words

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how

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Hmmmm you half to figure that out your self it will come to you if you really get into your article

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yeah help me please

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How old are you like 17 maby

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Yeah I am 17

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hbu

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Im 17 too

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Then what

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help me dear

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1 sec

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what do you want in your article action ,romance, drama?

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Like it is a report

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Ok then so you should add why the boy wants to kill him self and why he chose to do it the way he was trying to

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Because he love with a love but the girl don't like him

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maybe that why

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so you should say/ Yesterday, Hamza a 16 years old boy and a student in 10th grade was rescued from a water tower because, He fell in love with a girl but the girl did not feel the same way so he tried to kill himself in Misissauga,Ontario.

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so it be a lead sentence

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Yesterday, Hamza a 16 year old boy, and a student in 10th grade was rescued from a water tower because, He fell in love with a girl but the girl did not feel the same way so he was Heart broken and tried to kill himself in Misissauga,Ontario.

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I helped you with that part now you do the next part

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ok thanks dear

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I half to go

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ok thanks you so much

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hey

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Danngg there was a lot of spam in your answers

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yeah I know

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Please provide some more detail

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put @ then cameronodoherty she will be able to help

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and also please correct my grammar, spelling mistake

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@cameronodoherty

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I think she is not going to help me

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lol id think shes on no more

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You maybe help me

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im no use :P just a provider :D

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@Elsa213

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help me

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@dezz_theoffical101

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@Hotchellerae21

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