Question

someone want to help me with a 3 paragraph essay on well-fare state? i honestly dislike people who have this so thats why i am writing about it. its an assignment for english

Answer 1

@Compassionate

Answer 2

Tell me what you know about a Wellfare state so far.

Answer 3

well we are supposed to write an essay on something that annoys us and i picked this because i cant stand it when people are sitting on their butts texting and crap, but they dont even pay for it, like they get free money that other people who are trying to support their own family lose their money because it goes for them

Answer 4

Alright. I understand that so far, but tell me what you know about our wellfare system so far.

Answer 5

hmm not much i just have observed lol

Answer 6

and then i go and feel like punching a wall

Answer 7

Okay, well, 3 paragraphs isn't so hard.

Tell me something you see that upsets you.

Answer 8

uhm well i need a
~thesis statement
~topic sentence
~topic sentence
~topic sentence
~c- re-state (reward) thesis state conclusions (what i learned)

Answer 9

and that they get evrything but dont pay crap!

Answer 10

Okay, well, then, let me pose a question.

i. What is the most upsetting thing about Welfare?

Answer 11

that we are losing money out of our paychecks just to pay for their phone bills, etc

Answer 12

Huh? What type of Welfare is that? You live in the U.S, right?

Answer 13

yeah i do

Answer 14

There isn't a Welfare system that pays for someone's phone bill. We have Obama Phones, but that is for people who are working or trying to get a job. It's like a work phone.

Answer 15

and thats the problem, is that they get all of half* of our money when we wrk our butts off

Answer 16

and yeah health care/ welfare just pisses me off

Answer 17

They don't get half your money. Taxes are kind of low. Last week I made 160 gross in-come, and got 133 of it. So, that's only 27 dollars I paid in taxes. Which goes toward your Social Security, and other taxes are state taxes that help build schools and serve the community.

Answer 18

Let me help you out here.

Some forms of Welfare are:

- Housing
- Foodstamps
- WIC
- Pensions

Which one do you disagree with, and why? Do you disagree with all forms of Welfare?

Answer 19

because we lose money due to the govt. giving or i mean handing out free money and well it annoys the crap out of me to see poor retricesssss people sitting having their faces dazed in their phones when there are others with a bigger family and arent getting phones handed out to them or food its bull crap

Answer 20

Well, you're generalizing. We need to handle it topic by topic.

So, lets start with Foodstamps. Do you agree or disagree with them?

Answer 21

absolutely disagree

Answer 22

Okay, why?

Answer 23

people should have to work for their food,etc. it is not a right to give poor people all kinds of crap when they chose to get big holes in their ears or whatever

Answer 24

or just want to be lazy

Answer 25

@TheSmartOne

Answer 26

Well, now you're generalizing again. Not everyone on foodstamps is lazy. Sure, some abuse the system, but it's illegal.

The majority of people on foodstamps are mothers; who also work, but cannot afford to take care of their kids because the husband died or left. Some are disabled veterarns that can't work because they lost limbs or suffer mental issues. Some people are not able to work when they are born because they're mentally ill or physical disabled.

Should we kill these people?

Answer 27

no we shouldnt kill them, but i just dont agree on this

Answer 28

O.o

Answer 29

The working mother who puts in 40 hours a week, but barely makes it by and cannot feed her two children because her husband died; should we let her children simply starve?

No. We should feed and help her. We are a "community." Meaning, "Commune." We help each other. I've given money to the homeless and helped them eat. Simply because we make more money than those less fortunate does not mean we should look down on them. Never look down on someone unless you are helping them up.

The concept you are suggesting is Nazism [National Socialism]. Basically, we should do off with anyone who cannot contribute to society like you can. Right?

Answer 30

So, maybe welfare in general isn't bad. It has it's reasons and places in society.

Answer 31

well im talking about of the the people who choose to abuse it should not have it offered or shouldnt sign up for it just to get whatever

Answer 32

Anything system can be abused. So it's not Welfare that is bad, but people.

Answer 33

Try writing a paragraph about why we need Welfare
A paragraph mentioning circumstances that people should be on Welfare
And a paragraph discussing lazy people, and things we shouldn't fund.

Answer 34

hmm.. well im on the first paragraph lol

Answer 35

Okay well. Try using these ideas.

i. We need Welfare for vets who come back from battle
ii. Some people cannot work because they are disabled from birth, and some have injuries because of work.
iii. The rate of single mothers in America is on the rise. It's important that we nurture and protect the children, because they do not deserve to starve.
iv. Providing children with money, an education and food will help them grow up and seek jobs or go to college, and put money back into the system.

Just take everything I said and make a paragraph out of it. Try adding your own words and reasoning, too.

Answer 36

oh true well i can try summarizing an idea into it lol

Answer 37

An influential line of argument holds that globalization causes economic
uncertainty and encourages popular demands for compensatory welfare state spending.
This essay argues that the relationship between welfare and expansion is not being used
properly; many Americans choose to abuse this right or movement often, and that welfare
state expansion has been industrialized. It is known that there is no relationship between
globalization and the level of labor-market risks; in terms of employment and wages whereas
the uncertainty and dislocations caused by industrialization have encouraged many demands
for welfare state compensation and risk sharing.

Ultimately, welfare states actually don't help people in need. Instead they are having our
Government's balance off of self-interest or at least having them provide it. Even though there
are people out there who may actually need it I still don't support it due to having it abused for
the wrong reasons. Ever since the start of this it has caused taxes to become higher,disposable
income has reduced, many American Liberals think that it is a right for the rich alone to pay for
an American Welfare state, which has caused earnings over $52,000 to be taxed at 40 percent.

Welfare state causes social fractures,In redistributing earned income to those who choose not to
work , welfare states are not only unfair,they are controllingly unfair. In the millions of
Government workers who require the welfare state for their continued employment, a powerful
political class emerges. Furthermore, by blocking the job seeking unemployed, those who cannot
work , and the professional unemployed, welfare states fuel a arranging class of biases. This
feeds a dissection of social groups shaped by perceptions of social identity rather than by
common affinity, which is not good at all. I believe that even though there are people out there
with unemployment, I still think that instead of offering something that takes money out of those who work hard just to give it to those who don't work, they should support them in some other way that
wouldn't effect of put our country in debt.

Answer 38

@Compassionate

Answer 39

Looks good to me.

Answer 40

lol well i had to do some research, so i put some used phrases in there but does it look hand written or no?

Answer 41

@confluxepic

Answer 42

make sure its not too informative cause i had to research some stuff lol

Answer 43

@TheSmartOne

Answer 44

The essay is good. Do you want me to check for grammar mistakes.

Answer 45

no like does it sound as someone would say or does it look copied lol cause i stole some phrases

Answer 46

Copying from one is plagiarism.
Copying from many is research.

Answer 47

lol ^^

Answer 48

well i didnt copy i re worded lol

Answer 49

and i researched

Answer 50

this is a very argumentative topic lol

Answer 51

@mcnabkt I know. It was just a joke. I heard that line somewhere. Just can't remember.

Answer 52

OH okay :D

Answer 53

lol

Answer 54

@TheSmartOne do you agree with this?

Answer 55

like if it were a debate what would you argue

Answer 56

I will not put my personal beliefs into this matter.

Answer 57

what?!

Answer 58

im just saying if it werent optional atleast would you agree or diagree which side would you go on

Answer 59

I wouldn't say.

Answer 60

I think you should delete the post in which you wrote your essay. So if your teacher had a plagiarism checker, it wouldn't say that you plagiarized from Open Study.

Answer 61

oh okay