Question

Identify the problem with the following sentence. Thelma was the person who wrote the sales manual originally in the beginning.

Answer 1

it should be Originally in the beginning Thelma was the person who wrote the sales manual.

Answer 2

i think that there is still a mistake somewhere in there.

Answer 3

originally and in the beginning shouldn't come in the same sentence cuz they both mean the same.use only originally, that sounds better