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OpenStudy (anonymous):

sentence structure

OpenStudy (anonymous):

The violence in Cicero should be addressed by taking certain actions. Cicero has had four hundred and sixteen gang related shootings in the years between 2000 to 2010, and a total of sixty gang related murders according to its website.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

is that comma right if not how can i fix it

OpenStudy (leonardo0430):

did you write this sentence?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

yes

OpenStudy (anonymous):

why

OpenStudy (leonardo0430):

the comma is in a good place but in your second sentence take out the word "had" because it does not fit in there, replace "to" to "and" in your second sentence other than that its a good sentence :)

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